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Teasing hurts, the way a wounded heart bleeds.

Talent hurts, the way no one sees past the facade,
seeing only that which makes fame.

Anger hurts, the way a fire rages,
eating away the wood for fuel.

Losing hurts, the way shame overcomes,
taking all that was once thought best.

Fear hurts, the way adrenaline forces action,
running and falling from adversary.

Love hurts, the way of rejection,
stealing all hope but leaving desire.

Teasing hurts, the way a wounded heart bleeds.
:icondarkofthree:
I have been thinking I needed to write something, to let out 'What Hurts," but I think I over-did it.
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:iconeikaj:
mmm i like it :fav:
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:icondarkofthree:
Oh, thank you again! :)
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*TakJak Dec 17, 2006  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I'm sorry :( it's sad, but awesome...and i love the first/last line. they're the same, anyway, lol~
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:icondarkofthree:
:) Hmm, thank you. I wrote something else, so go look at it.
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:icontakjak:
*TakJak Dec 17, 2006  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
O_o; uh, okay... xD yeesh, order me around :P
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:icondarkofthree:
You order me around all the time.
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:icontakjak:
*TakJak Dec 18, 2006  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Shut up x3
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:icondarkofthree:
Argh! :XD: My point exactly.
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:icontakjak:
*TakJak Dec 22, 2006  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:P
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:icondarkofthree:
:glomp:

How about, I tackle you and grab your foot...?
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